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Graham Earnshaw's avatar

Good poem, except for the pitiful so-called rhyme of “jungle walk” with “4 o’clock”. Please refer to Graham Earnshaw’s tune Time to Rhyme on Apple Music, Spotify and other platforms for details.

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Sandy Read Reiberg's avatar

Bob, I don't know if it's aging brain that is making me think I've never seen most of the THROWBACK THURSDAY stories, but if my memory is just addled, this one was as fresh as a DAISY, and I have a renewed appreciation for (1) Christopher's cuteness, (2), scary stories in October, and (3) your amazing and vast array of writing skills - stories? journalism? poetry? perhaps the Great American Novel? You are among the BEST of any writers I know, and I met Kurt Vonnegut....just saying.

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